Rough Cut Feedback

Genre and use of conventions

• Good variation of shots
• Continuous narrative
• clear structure and narrative
• Good green-screening

Performance

• Really good lip-syncing
• Lip-syncing bit out of time at the end
• good balance of lip-syncing and non lip-syncing shots

Mise-en-scene

• Good use of lighting
• Good locations

Camera Work

• Variety of levels
• Variety of camera positions

Editing

• Unambitious
• Green-screening worked well
• Showed characters feelings

Suggestions for additional footage

• More narrative and performance

To Do List

Filming;

• film a billboard so we show picture of ex and new girlfriend
• lamp post for poster saying dumped and picture of singers face
• newspaper stand headline board
• singer seeing ex and new girlfriend together
• shots of new couple together
• re film house events when not dark
• lip sync in new place

Rough Cut

Student video

Re-Shot Flashbacks

Test Shot

For one part of the song we used greenscreen to put the singer in the corner of the shot as though she was thinking and remembering flashbacks of herself and her ex. We have shot this however it wasn't as effective as we thought as it as fuzzy green around the side we are going to re-shoot this scene wearing different clothing so the green is no longer there and we are also going to make the singer sit further away from the wall this should help.