Rough Cut Feedback

Genre and use of conventions

• Good variation of shots
• Continuous narrative
• clear structure and narrative
• Good green-screening

Performance

• Really good lip-syncing
• Lip-syncing bit out of time at the end
• good balance of lip-syncing and non lip-syncing shots

Mise-en-scene

• Good use of lighting
• Good locations

Camera Work

• Variety of levels
• Variety of camera positions

Editing

• Unambitious
• Green-screening worked well
• Showed characters feelings

Suggestions for additional footage

• More narrative and performance