Greenscreening

The Beginning Shot - Still to Action

Screen Grab of Timeline

Feedback

Genre and Use of Conventions

• Female vocalist
• Performance driven

Mise-en-scene

• Good variety of locations
• Singer is small in the middle of the screen - appropriate for the song
• Leaves added to the overall effect of the video - the season fitted with the song

Performance and Lip-syncing

• Good lip-syncing
• Performance driven
• Good ending with the narrative - brought it all together

Camerawork

• Artistic shots - greenscreen, water feature, lava lamp and fish
• Good variety of shots

Editing

• Split screen - gave it more variety
• Transitions - gave it more variety

Negative Point

• Continuity - the fact that it is light outside, then dark and then light again
  

Our Final Video

Rough Cut Feedback

Genre and use of conventions

• Good variation of shots
• Continuous narrative
• clear structure and narrative
• Good green-screening

Performance

• Really good lip-syncing
• Lip-syncing bit out of time at the end
• good balance of lip-syncing and non lip-syncing shots

Mise-en-scene

• Good use of lighting
• Good locations

Camera Work

• Variety of levels
• Variety of camera positions

Editing

• Unambitious
• Green-screening worked well
• Showed characters feelings

Suggestions for additional footage

• More narrative and performance

To Do List

Filming;

• film a billboard so we show picture of ex and new girlfriend
• lamp post for poster saying dumped and picture of singers face
• newspaper stand headline board
• singer seeing ex and new girlfriend together
• shots of new couple together
• re film house events when not dark
• lip sync in new place