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Genre and Use of Conventions

• Female vocalist
• Performance driven

Mise-en-scene

• Good variety of locations
• Singer is small in the middle of the screen - appropriate for the song
• Leaves added to the overall effect of the video - the season fitted with the song

Performance and Lip-syncing

• Good lip-syncing
• Performance driven
• Good ending with the narrative - brought it all together

Camerawork

• Artistic shots - greenscreen, water feature, lava lamp and fish
• Good variety of shots

Editing

• Split screen - gave it more variety
• Transitions - gave it more variety

Negative Point

• Continuity - the fact that it is light outside, then dark and then light again